_Sloth Poem_ Re: Yet another text for translation

>The sheep bleats,
>   hungry for food,
>   hungry for warmth.
>The sturdy mangrove,
>   roots deep in the water,
>   sways in the breeze.
>And the sloth just watches.
>
>Great comforting leaves.
>Warm distressed wool.
>And the sloth just watches.
NOTE: Lingwa Frakas is my first ConLang. Its for the purpose of _ostranenie_
- creativity  -art - as de-familiarization;  making familiar strange.
    It has lotsa influences - mainly Chinese Pidgin English, Tok Pisin, and
Bislama with Japanese onomatpoeia and slang thrown in.

okay... in the ConLang pidgin-in-progress called Lingwa Frakas: Mutand Inglis
Pidjin (Lingua Fracas: Mutant English Pidgin):

Plenti shipi blit,
   hangri far fud,
   hangri far hot.
Tuf wata tri wid plenti big rud,
   plenti rut dip in wata,
   in briz  ::soyo-soyo:: .
An karawac jast long-tem ai-bal.

Plenti mig ::pika-pika:: gren flawa blong tri.
Hot plenti-wabi wul.
An karawac jast long-tem ai-bal.


    In the sort of time I have right now, I think only a few things need
immediate explanations:

::  ____::  <==== onomatopoetic voice (words derived from Japanese
onomatopoeia)

"karawac"  <=== derived from Jack Kerouac (hommage to the Kerouac line: "The
Sloth is a Chinese Poet upsidedown")
    I do not like the libel that the word "sloth" connotes (and it seems
other languages - both NatLang and ConLang - continue to slander the poor,
slow, methodical animal). The sloth is a survivor from the earliest days of
the Age of Mammals. That must count for something!